托福写作增分语句归纳及分享

许多同学们都要想在创作中取得高分数，可是短时间创作却并并不是较为非常容易拿分的一个新项目。今日我就跟大伙儿分享一些怎样从句式这一方面不断进步的方式。
精确的语句表述
1. 句型分析
英文的句式包含下列几类，简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等。在新托福写作中，一般应用复合句，加上并列句和并列复合句，自然毫无疑问要有简单句，*长短句紧密结合。下边摘录好多个语句给大伙儿了解并剖析一下复合句和并列复合句。
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
他们是一个复合句，由even though正确引导的妥协状语从句。
b.This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
他们中是一个复合句。with代词构造中，有一个that正确引导的同位语从句对result开展解释说明。
c.I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句话是一个并排复杂句。and 联接了2个语句，是一个并列句;because正确引导的缘故状语从句。
d.Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
他们一样是并排复杂句。由and联接2个语句，变成并列句，再一个which正确引导的定语从句。
2. 有什么问题的语句的例举
学生写的语句非常容易出現三个难题：一是应用粉碎句，二是应用连续句，三是语句联接有误。
1) 粉碎句
说白了粉碎句，便是语句不详细，一般 是沒有宾语(也就是说宾语是形容词的非谓语形式，如词性标注)，或是是从句独立成句。
粉碎句：She singing alone. (无宾语，singing是现在分词)
恰当句：She is singing alone.
粉碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句独立成句)
恰当句：He did not come because he was sick.
2) 连续句
说白了连续据，便是2个语句立即连在一起，既未应用连词，也未应用恰当的标点。
连续句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
恰当句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
恰当句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3) 语句联接有误
说白了语句联接有误，便是2个独立的句子中间以分号联接，它是不符合英语时态的。恰当的作法是以连词、
分号、灶具、句点等联接2个语句。
有误句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
恰当句：Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

高分数表述
除开在句型上长短句紧密结合精确表述外，提议学生要应用一些独特的句型，以使句式多元化。句式多元化也是优秀作文获得高分数的标准*。除开大家以前常常提及的高分数句型，如倒装句、强调句、状语前置、插入语等，这儿也有此外一个句型的多种多样转变，即主语多元化。下边为大伙儿例举好多个语句大约详细介绍前边四种句式，而关键剖析主语多元化。
一切正常句： Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒装句： Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词坐落于句首的部分倒装。)
一切正常句： The internet provides people access to the latest information.
强调句：It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (注重the internet)
一切正常句： The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
状语前置句：Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
一切正常句：However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
插入语：New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (连词however做插入语)
1.主语多种多样
1. 她忽然想起了一个想法。
She suddenly had an idea.
学生会立刻对他们开展汉语翻译，基础不容易动句子成分。可是以人做为主语的英语短句一直不能够很吸引人，因此 这一语句假如略微做下改动，以后边的宾语“想法”做主语，这一语句会产生一些转变。 An idea suddenly occurred to her.
2. 他驾车不耐烦，基本上惹祸。
He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.
他们仍然是拿人做主语，略微改一下，把不耐烦这一修饰词的名词形式做主语，会大不一样。
His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.
3. 我们立足开创于1789年。
The United States of America was founded in 1789.
他们沒有一切不正确，可是不足多种多样，可以用時间作主语。
The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.
学生能够在平常训练中娴熟应用所述文章内容所说的托福写作高分数句式的写作方法，争得在托福写作考試中取得优异成绩。